What have you learned from your audience feedback?
I conducted some primary research for my music video by doing audience feedback. I did a few questionnaires and surveys before and after I completed my text. Another thing I did to get audience feedback, was by sitting some of them down, with my trailer in front of us and asked for their opinions and thoughts of what they thought I did well and what they thought I could improve on.
The first person I asked to do this was my sister. She too studied media studies a few years back and has a brief understanding of creating a text. She has similar taste in films, she really likes the horror genre, so it was good to have the opinion of someone who was a fan of my genre, who would give me a critical analysis of my film trailer using media terminologies. The bullets below show her opinions and my thoughts on them.
- 'The thing I thought worked best from your trailer was the opening scene, where the final girl was talking into the camera, shaken up and really frightened. It really made me feel for her and in some ways made me feel really frightened and nervous for her.' - I was really happy at this particular comment she made, as that was the exact effect I was going for. I made the final girl hold the camera, shaking it a little, looking a bit distressed and frightened for her life, to allow the audience feel nervous and frightened for her, which was exactly what sally felt whilst watching the trailer. This comment shows that I was successful in the effect I was trying to put out.
- 'I think that you got the music for your trailer spot on. It really creates a frightening and intense atmosphere, which really goes well with the girl speaking her final words into the camera. Not only this but I think that the music creates that spookiness that goes so well with the theme of the trailer and feel that the lyrics in the song relates really well with what the trailer is about and it almost tells us that something bad is going to happen, but not giving it away, which really keeps us on edge, which is exactly what we want in a horror film trailer.' - This comment, I was also pleased with as it tells me that I have achieved the main outcome of my goal, which was to create a intense atmosphere by the music, putting all the cuts just at the right places, frightening my audience, putting them on edge, making them want more and to really feel the music. I purposely used that children's nursery rhyme, not only because it's filmed in a school, but because it's a tune that everyone was familiar with and so every time they hear this they think of my trailer.
- 'The cuts in your trailer are really effective and I think make the trailer look a lot more professional, giving it more rhythm, and I feel are in the right places, as it is not giving the main plot away, the cuts ensure that. However I think that maybe you shout shorten down a couple of your clips, in particular, the dark scene, where the zombie is coming closer and closer. I feel that this should be cut down because we are looking at a black screen for a long time, at first it is frightening because all you can hear it dragging footsteps, but it just goes on for too long, cutting the tension.' - I'm glad she picked up on the cuts in the trailer, because before hand I didn't include any of them and my trailer was just long clips with no rhythm, which I was just going to leave, but then decided to experiment with fast pace cuts, which proved to work in my favour. I'm glad I got some criticism, as I really do learn from it and this particular one tells me what I can improve on for next time. I need to get into the habit of cutting my clips down, as she included in her comment as it really does cut the tension, especially because it's a horror trailer, which needs to grab the interest of my audience at all times.
- I really liked your two ancillary tasks. The poster was really good. I liked how it wasn't cluttered, which I feel wouldn't be as good, as you wouldn't be able to focus on one thing. You stuck to the convention of using one main image, placed in the center, which is the main character, which I really liked and the use of colours was effective, as they really related to the genre. I have to say, I much preference your DVD cover, as it looks like an existing cover. It has everything you need to include and I think it looks really good.' - I'm happy with these comments and have learnt that simple is good and that things doesn't have to include too much detail to look good.
- 'The thing I was impressed with most would definitely be the news report. I really liked how you made it look realistic and adding it in made the whole thing look more 'real' within the trailer.' - I'm glad that this comment was made, as I wasn't going to add thins bit in, as I felt it gave a sort of jokey look to the trailer, but I now realise that it is just because I didn't want to include myself into the trailer. From this comment I have learnt to include clips that make my trailer look that engender more successful, even if it means I have to be in it.
- Overall, I think you have done a really good job with the creation of the horror trailer, as well as your two tasks. You have followed a lot of the conventions and Even challenged a few. I feel that you have made a successful trailer that you should be proud of and it does, to me give off a professional look. The only thing I would pick up on is that maybe you should add in more sound effects to make the trailer more effective and also I think more camera angles should also be included, they really are effective. I noticed you used a low angle shot which worked really well, creating an intimidating look. Add more shots and your trailer would look even better.' - This comment tells me that I have made a successful horror trailer which was the goal and she has given me points to improve on. I have learnt, from this comment to fairy the shot I use, and not to be afraid to experiment with different camera angles, as it would make my trailer look a lot better and more professional.
The next person I got some feedback from was my friend Nicole. She wasn't a member of my target audience, she even hates the horror genre, I thought it would be interesting to get her thoughts and opinions on my work. She also had no knowledge at all of the subject. Even though her comments weren't on the technical things, like camera shots'angles, mise en scene, editing, sound ect. they were still useful to me and allowed me to learn what I did well, as well as what I could improve on.
- 'I really liked how you made the zombie look realistic and scary.' - Doing the zombie make up took over two hours, so I'm glad I got a realistic look from it, as that was exactly what I wanted. Whilst filming the scenes, I came to realise how important mise en scene really is because without that long black jacket, the zombie didn't look really realistic, as underneath was normal, human like clothes. So clothing was really important and I decided, to put more of a modern twist to it by making the zombie wear normal, human clothes under, wearing black wedged heels, just to give it more of a modern and effective look, which I feel worked in my favour, as Nicole commented, saying it looked realistic.
- 'The setting was good. I like how you filmed in both bright and dark locations.' - At first, I wasn't too sure about filming in bright locations, but was left with no choice, as I was filming at school, where it was always going to be bright outside. I was going to edit it and make it look dull looking instead, but decided to stick with the bright contrast, as I feel it does look effective and gives my audience a sense of hope for the characters in the trailer, for a split second. I feel that the location of my trailer was successful as it was rather large, so I was able to vary on different setting of the school. Nicole's comment told me that filming a horror trailer in bright locations, doesn't make the trailer any worse, as long as the content and the setting is good, the contrast doesn't matter too much.
- 'I liked the sound effects you used within the trailer.' I was happy that Nicole commented positively on the sound effects I used, as I wasn't too sure if they worked in my favour or not, as I thought the zombie roar effect I added in, was slightly over the top and not very realistic, but within the feedback I got, from Nicole and everyone else, I have learnt that sometimes over the top is good and not always a negative thing and that it is always good have add in sound effects as it makes the trailer look far more interesting and really does capture the audience and is something they can pick up on.
- 'I really like the look of both , the DVD case and the movie poster. It looks effort into it and it looks really good.' - I am glad I've got positive comments on my ancillary tasks as both of them took me a very long time to plan and complete. I'm am glad that she saw that I have put a lot of effort into them, as the poster, doesn't necessarily look as if there is too much detail involved, as I only used one main image, to stick to conventions and believed that less is more, especially for a horror type poster.
- 'Overall, I think that all of your work look great and both, your DVD case and your movie poster relates with your trailer really well.' - Nicole's feedback, overall tells me that I have produced a good piece of work and told me not to be afraid to experiment with the contrast, as well as sound effects.
The last person I sat down and got feedback from was Max. He is a member of my target audience, he is of the age and has a passion for the horror genre. Max is also a Media student, which made his opinions important to me, as he knows what to look for.
- The most effective thing in the trailer was the fast pace cuts from the character from the beginning to a clip related and how this continued for three or four cuts. By doing this it gives the audience a view of what is going on and what the final girl is talking about, which is an important factor.' - A convention I stuck to was fast pace cuts, as it gives off that effective and frightening look that the audience wants to see. I'm glad that Max picked up on this, as I have learnt that if I do decide to create another trailer, fast pace cuts is key, to really get the audience involved, which is the aim of all trailers.
- I really liked the fade to black effects you used and the headings in the trailer, it again involves the audience, as one of them were 'If you thought you were safe in school...' getting them to feel as if they weren't and creating a frightening effect. I also think that adding 'from the makers of...' also gave it a good effect, as it tell the audience what the creators are capable of and if they were scared of the films said in the trailer, they knew that this one would be even scarier and this would really draw them in.' - I was a bit unsure about keeping 'from the creators of...' in, as I wasn't too sure, I didn't think it looked right and didn't fit in with the trailer itself. However by Max saying that, it made me sure about keeping it in.
- 'Your ancillary tasks work well with the main task. I really like how in the poster the zombie is looking directly into the camera, almost as if it is trying to draw us all in to watch the film.' - This confirmed to me not to worry about the poster, as Max was the third person to compliment the poster, even though I thought I would get a lot of criticism about it because, even though I put so much effort into it, it doesn't look like the most detailed poster and I was worried that everyone would pick up on that and make negative comments towards it. However, now I have learnt and now believe, from everyone's comments, that it doesn't have to be the most detailed poster to be good and effective.
Audience feedback is definitely a huge part of making a successful trailer, as they tell me what I have done right and what I could improve on. Getting negative feedback, also really helps, as it tells me what I need to do to make my trailer better and it makes me determined on turning all the negatives into positives. Gathering opinions from different types of people and not just my target audience was really helpful too, as it showed me what different types of people thought of all three tasks, even those who didn't necessarily like the horror genre, so it was really interesting to get their point of view.
Asking my audience their opinions on my tasks was really helpful as, if someone said something that could benefit my trailer, I would edit my draft and include whatever they said would improve it. Every adjustment I made to my drafts, proved to make it look better and better, which just shows how important every bit of feedback is.
Something I have learned from getting audience feedback is that you can never have too many drafts or advice on how you can improve, as all of this helps you create a better product. I feel that if I hadn't reflected on their opinions in detail, my trailer wouldn't be as successful as it is now.
The overall feedback which I gathered, suggests that they liked the trailer which indicates I have created a trailer which represents the horror genre successfully. From the feedback which is supported by the Uses and Gratifications theory, it is apparent that the main use of my trailer is for enjoyment and pleasure due to it being a gory and frightening video. This is exactly what wanted to achieve as it is typical of the horror genre.